BtVS Fanfic: Untitled Chat

[PointOfFact]

If you want to say something about the fanfic, please say it on this board so the other one doesn't get stocked up with them.

All feedback is welcomed, constructive critism only please, no rude comments about how bad the first chapter is [LOL, yes, I'm judging my own work]. So feedback can be left either here or through my email. Possibly DarkChild's is she doesn't mind.

Thanks!

[DarkChild]

I have to review to this story. Spikegirl4evr ur doing an excellent job with ur chapters. So much in detail and even tho u did somethings that i didnt plan on that is wut makes it a challenge to turn it around to my liking and still have the story plot running smooth. I just have to commend u on ur excellent writing skills. Keep it up!

[SinfulSoul]

You two are great!! I love the fic, lotsa drama, action and humor. Keeps me wantin more, I hope ya will write more...and more.

[Gardez]

Hi Segceevee,

They are doing a great job...But I was dis-appointed that you weren't one of the writers.

The three of you together were really good...and it was amazing how you would compliment each other.

[SinfulSoul]

Hey T,

Thanks so much for the complement , but I really can't write. Just bits and pieces like in the TC fic. But to write out whole chapters would be too much for my little head..

[DarkChild]

Well when we finish this fic... we mite do another and this time well have to 3 to 4 different ppl join all together and who ever is interested we can work out something. I didnt noe that ppl liked writing fics the only ppl i knew that liked writing was me n spikesgirl4evr.. well, if anyone wants to join the next fic whenever this fic is done let me noe... it will most likely be another btvs or an ats its too early for a tc fic... if ur interested let me noe at [e-mail]

[PointOfFact]

Btw, if anyone is confused at what time in the series this story takes place, it's not really in anytime.

This story is a AU [alternate universe] sort of story since there's so many differences, Kennedy and Tara existing at the same time, Faith not having come back from prison yet, Buffy realizing she loves Spike BEFORE his death, and probably much more as the story goes on. Just wanted to clear up any confusion, although, every serious even that happened in the original series before season 7 is true, besides Tara's death and Anya and Xander's splitting up [they're still together]. Also, Spike has his soul and everything’s Jim Dandy. I think I covered it all, lmao.

[DarkChild]

LOL!!! I have to handed to u Spikegirl4evr u really noe how to screw with me... wut i want u change it to wut u want.... U wud think we shud work together on the same pace and c where each other is going but here its like u noe where i want to go n u prevent that from happening cz u want it to go ur way and then i have to turn it around to my way... each chapter just gets difficult with u.... but i aint backing down, im still holding down this challenge.

See readers difference between me n her is shes a major spuffy fan u noe the whole spike/buffy relationship while me im the more faith/buffy thing.

[SinfulSoul]

Ya should do a love triangle type of thing. Drama fo yo mamma, lol sorry. I like both shippers, the more lovin the better. And who cares what they have to say from the Bible Belt of Japan. lmao. Im so bad.

[PointOfFact]

Actually, I'm trying to keep the story pretty much action/plot based with some tidbits of relationship stuff. I tried going along with what DC was working with, the b/f relationship thing but like I said, action/plot based story.

I always usually do Spuffy fanfic and never before just focused on the villains so this is like an exploration thing for me, seeing how well I can play it out. But every story needs an around the plot plot. Did that make sense? You always need small relationship stuff, like W/T, W/K, A/X, B/S, and even a little B/F if that's what DC wants.. but like I said 'Focusing on evilness'.

Lol, glad you guys like the story so far!

Segceevee, I agree with T, it would be kewl to have you writing alongside, three people alternating writing chapters would be hilarious to see and interesting to read.

DC, you're doing a good job with your chapters as well! I look forward to reading where the plot is going when you enter a chapter, I'm one of the writers but I even find this story interesting... does that sound braggy? Hmph. Well I'm really into the chapters you do, DC, keep up the good work!

[Maddie]

The story is [glow=red,2,300]GREAT[/glow]!!!!!!


But i was a little surprised when i read that Faith went lez, and wanted Buffy. Personally, I like the whole Spuffy thing.

[PointOfFact]

Yeah, I write Spuffy on a regular basis so that was a little off, even if I did write some of it myself. I don't mind b/f but yeah, a little 'off'.

Btw, Thank You!

[Tru Angel]

Im a constant reader of btvs fanfic and ive read soooo many stories with b/f and it does make sense to do that... Y cz when u watch season 3 n 4 they have a lot of chemistry even Joss said himself those 2 had chemistry... but yea i guess most ppl here who r reading like the spuffy thing therefore ill leave it to the spuffy thing... not to surprise anyone... also not to make Garmez get all these emails that oppose the thing and i dont want to get the story hammered either...

[DarkChild]

Nice chapter 8

[Maddie]

Your guys fanfic is soooo GREAT!!! I'm always wantin more of it. You two should become publishers. But hey SG, howcome you had to finish off chapter 8 on another psot?? Is there a maximum to what you can write in one post??


By the way, its soooooooooooooooooooooo GREAT!!!!
Keep it up guys. (or it should say, girls)lol ;D

[PointOfFact]

Yeah, the maximum amount of characters in one post is 10,000, with my chapter 8, I exceded that and had to go over to another post, but it's all good.

I'll have my chapter 10[?] in by January, I promise. But it is the holidays and getting very hectic so I just haven't had time to write it but I promise. Hey, maybe it'll be a New Year's present to you guys? Lol. I'm so conceited.

[PointOfFact]

I finally figured out a name for the fic. It'll now be know as: The unknown.

Not truely original but I thought it needed a name so I apointed it one.

[DarkChild]

Nice name to the fic it made a real big difference well, i honestly read ur last chapter and i have no idea wut to write next... so its going to take me a loonnngg time before updating maybe in February as i am booked with hw for the holidays that i need to start working on cz there is only a week left and i have tons, plus exams coming at the end of january need to study for that and so yup while i try to figure out wut i can write next it wont be updated for ages.

[Maddie]

Hey SG
I just read your last chapter, and you had vamps coming into the house. But a vampire cant come in unless its invited. So how does your story work?


But anyway, you two are great writers. I always look forward to your chapters.

[PointOfFact]

Well I guess the story works as the vamps are actually ubervamps but the scoobies don't know the difference yet, seeing as this is basically an alternate reality type season seven. But I might have one of the scoobies bring that up, like Xander be all:

"Am I the only one wondering how vamps are in your house right now, Buff? 'Cuz remember that old, and goldly good, rule that vamps can't come in unless invited?"

Or something, lol. I totally forgot though but now that I think about it, they can be ubervamps. Giles will do his whole splainy thing, too. I was just, you know, going with the whole end of chapter thing DC did, the vampires are about to attack and nobody really saw their faces yet, right? Spike just threw the axe, he didn't necessarily see it. So yeah.. good question.

We'll see how it goes.