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Post by Goddess on Jan 28, 2004 12:09:53 GMT -5
Ok i have a fanfic tht i started. ive benn writing it in my free time as something to do and decided to post it for you guys to read if you want to. i havent finished it all but if you guys like it ill add more. check it out. www.freewebs.com/trugoddess/index.htm |
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Post by Somebody Help Me on Feb 17, 2004 12:28:46 GMT -5
Hey, thats pretty good. I could picture them saying their lines in my head. See, now the only problem is forgetting which is your work, and which is Fox's work. ;D
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Post by Goddess on Feb 17, 2004 16:31:03 GMT -5
lol! Thanks!
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Post by Goddess on Feb 18, 2004 8:56:49 GMT -5
Well i just added the next chapter to my fanfic. so if youve been reading check it out.
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Post by casper14 on Feb 26, 2004 20:54:50 GMT -5
hey when r you going to write more ..... it's really good
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Post by Goddess on Feb 27, 2004 8:02:15 GMT -5
well soon now that i know people actually read it.
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Post by quarrel on Feb 29, 2004 19:57:18 GMT -5
Please: black print, tighten up (too many "stage directions" for prose), spell check, and lose the butterfly stationery.
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Post by casper14 on Mar 2, 2004 17:56:10 GMT -5
don't listen to them it was good!!
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Post by BlackFire on Apr 2, 2004 12:31:43 GMT -5
[ TEXTcool  ...its so much like Fox's work... |
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Post by Roadrunner on Apr 21, 2004 14:36:13 GMT -5
I liked it. It was fun to read.
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Post by rsocr3 on Apr 22, 2004 15:58:26 GMT -5
i liked it too. it was awesome. later
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Post by Willow on Apr 22, 2004 23:37:24 GMT -5
Dont worry I will get around to readin it!
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Post by Roadrunner on Apr 24, 2004 19:41:44 GMT -5
(chanting) finish, finish, finish...
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Post by zulu on Jun 30, 2004 16:21:56 GMT -5
Please: black print, tighten up (too many "stage directions" for prose), spell check, and lose the butterfly stationery. Ooh, I agree. And more paragraphs! I know it may seem extravagant, but a new one every time someone speaks isn't unheard of.  It's a cute story but I bet you could edit it to good effect. Go you! The more you write, the better you'll get.  |
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Post by surfersdream on Jun 30, 2004 16:49:04 GMT -5
Wow that was really good.
It was like i could see the whole thing playing out in my head. I could actually see Harrison, Tru, Davis, Lindsey, and everyone else.
Can't wait til there is more.
Please Please Please tell me when there is more. like send me a message or something.
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Post by jenna224 on Jan 18, 2005 12:02:02 GMT -5
when you putting more...its really good so far
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Post by JB on Jan 18, 2005 22:50:09 GMT -5
What's the web address?
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Post by Goddess on Mar 14, 2005 17:17:24 GMT -5
Allright anybodys whos interested in reading the fanfic i rewrote it( its the same story i just fixed it a little because i wrote it when i first started writing fan fics and it was kind of crappy. Although it might still be anyways) ill get it on the web and post the address soon.
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...its so much like Fox's work...
